Winter's Twelfth Night

Hi there! Here is your review, as promised. Might I start by commending your excellent grammar? Nice job! Just a few nit-picks: "If it is necessary" I replied. Comma after ...

Hey Arya! Review: Well, these are all about rather deep and controversial topics. Death, wrist cutting, suicide. It seems like you are going for a more unstructured format rather than ...

Hello Fading-dream! I am Winter, and I am here to review you story! First, the nit-picks: Well, this is the only table with any seats left, isn't it? And look ...

I read this to review it, but since I cannot find anything wrong with it I will just comment. Well, first of all you have excellent grammar. Second, I wish ...

Hello kestralspace! I am Winter, and I shall review your prologue today! I love The Highwayman! It's one of my favorite poems. Well, your prologue is so short... there's really ...

Hi there, Ballerina! Yay! The third chapter! I've decided not to give you a very nit-picky review this time. Instead, I will just point out a bunch of things that ...

Hello Tennisprincess! Well, this was quite an interesting story for its length. Only 350 words? That's tough! Seeing as you are only three words away from the limit, I will ...

Hi there Israeli_Camel! I am Winter. I would like to start by telling you that I enjoyed reading this story very much. But I do have one question: Is this ...

Hello Anna! Welcome to YWS! I am Winter. First of all, I noticed that you have not written any reviews. I would just like to let you know (or remind ...

Hello KnightlyAngel! This was lovely, and different. I love the descriptive language and the perfect word choice. I could see everything happening in my head with perfect clarity. What an ...

Hello Aubree! Well, you've successfully made me giggle. I could totally imagine this happening. Sort of. I have my own, definitely off version of the story in my head. First ...

Hey Lord Anzius! You've got quite an interesting prologue here. Nitpicks: He who has created the first systematical library and he who conquered the lands of his lowly foes. Take ...

Hello Moriah Leila! I am here with your review! Hmm... it seems Mars has covered quite a bit. Here are my corrections: [s]Strikethrough[/s] means delete Bold means comments or corrections ...

Oh Meep that was absolutely hilarious! I couldn't stop laughing! My Dad had to come in to ask me if I was ok because I probably sounded like I'd gone ...

Hmm... I'm not really a book hater. I don't usually finish books that I don't like. But... I absolutely hate the Clique series! They're - for lack of a better ...